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Cutting by ~bloodblack:iconbloodblack:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Dark




I cut myself and watch it bleed,
I feel the rush inside of me,
I don't cause I'm stupid, or I'm ignored,
I do it because I'm kinda bored,
Running down, the bloods so great,
How did I ever get to this state?
I know its wrong, that I should fight,
then why the hell does it feel so right?
Why can't I stop, how can this be,
that I cut myself were no one can see,
no cries for help, don't want to be found,
but walking around my blood stains the ground,
I need help, I know I do,
I hidwe in the dark, won't come through,
And so, unfinished this poem shall go,
because, what happens next you never shall know.
-Mikki
©2003-2009 ~bloodblack
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Author's Comments

ya...i wrote this in English cause i was about to burst out cryin...i dun want anyone to see me cry so i tend to just start to write whenever im depressed...i wrote 3 poems.
-Mikki

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~northern-image Oct 17, 2003, 5:34:07 PM
Wow, this is a really powerful poem. Are you okay? Because you haven't been uploading muhc lately, or haven't on much at all. :/
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~bloodblack Oct 17, 2003, 5:55:12 PM
i left a comment for u on ur profile..i think...lol. im grounded. ill upload some crap right now.
-Mikki
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~AbsTracK Oct 18, 2003, 8:48:55 AM
hmm..so this was the meaning behind your msn name..makes sense now...

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[...The Tears in my eyes, only hide my dark cries...]
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~TheAwesomeOne Dec 6, 2006, 5:35:16 PM
Wow...this is how i usually feel....at first i started cutting because i was depressed but i usually do it because im bored

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One wish to make everything disappear
Maybe I'll be happy than...........
....Kill the darkness
Don't die unwanted
....Kill the darkness
Make your life alright
....Kill the darkness
But remember
....Kill the darkness
Don't kill yourself
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~vampires-exist Jan 12, 2007, 10:30:34 PM
this is a really good poem and i can relate to it at some parts.
bubi
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~dragong386 Feb 8, 2007, 10:53:56 PM
i'm so sorry for what ever pain or depression you went or are going through i never cut myself but i used to bang my head on the wall till i passed out and that was my salvation
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~theanimegirl88 Apr 22, 2007, 12:20:22 PM
wow that is...wow i love it..you are really good.
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~juggerknots May 10, 2007, 2:49:36 PM
wow i can really relate , it sucks but i cant stop. really great poem <3

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Iam sick of trying, iam sick of crying, i know ive been smiling but inside iam dying
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~juggerknots May 10, 2007, 2:50:01 PM
wow i can really relate , it sucks but i cant stop. really great poem <3

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Iam sick of trying, iam sick of crying, i know ive been smiling but inside iam dying
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